Composition - first draft

Click clack, click clack rumble, I'am riding the train home from Calafornia, it was so fun I want to do it Spring break on the same train. I can eat in the food car or my room, it's my choise. The food is so good that I whant seconts for disert. I go ucrost the deset and into the country, it is realy hot in the desert so I don't like the heater on. One night I slept on the top bunk and the other I sleeps on the opiste. The air smeld like they had a pet skunk but the food smeld really good and I mean awsome.