Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Shots Composition

HOOK
I'm always right. Like when I got a shot and my mom and my brother
said it would not hurt and it did, a lot.

SENTENCE TELLING YOUR PROBLEM
Shots HURT when you get them but when you dont get them then you will get sick.

VOICE:
Just the thought of the needle poking in my skin give me a stomach
ache. I get sick to my stomach when I hear my mom making a doctor
appointment on the phone because I know that as soon as I walk in
there, they will give me another shot.

SENTENCE TELLING YOUR RESOLUTION
step 1

I want to invent a cream that you can put on my arm so that it is so
numb that I do not feel anything.

step 2
Then I would stick my face into a pitch black area.

step 3


PARAGRAPH CONCLUSION

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